Thread: [Fic] Revan's Revenge
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Old 02-17-2009, 08:15 AM   #2
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Chapter 1
In the heart of Mandalore, the final son of Mandalore the great was born.

Mandalore's wife Jessica was in pain, she had just given birth, and was dying a very painful death, but while she was dying got visions of the futer of her son of all the honor. he will resolve and then she saw what she wished she would never see her son do he was killing his father with a bright blood stand red light saber through his heart and another purple light saber cleaving off his head, but disturber her the most was that he enjoyed it then everything stopped her heart her brain then she started to crash but there was one word that spaced her mouth before she died, and that was Revan.

this is a better preview for my first chapter there will be more emotion when i really do it but i hope you guys like it


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