Thread: [NSW-Fic] The Dragonfighters
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Old 02-17-2009, 08:01 AM   #2
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I really need to start reading the stuff here more...

I'm no critic, so I can't see any obvious problems with it - but then again, Jae, your stuff is always of such quality.

I realyl liked the descriptions of battle - hectic, loud and bloody. And Jailyn's struggle to keep herself from suffering her brother's fate.

I look forward to seeing the next few chapters!







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