The scene was well-written, as previous posters have said
It's well polished and is very traditional fantasy--not a bad thing in itself, but it;s too early to say as we haven't seen much of the plot yet
The fight descriptions are smooth and detailed, while the Fest'ari sound interestingly sentient--if so, why attack in swarms that would surely see heavy losses? Hopefully there will be more on the different factions and prcisely why Jailyn's village was attacked!
P.S. I like Daerved's name :3