Thread: [Fic] Revan's Revenge
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Old 02-20-2009, 03:59 PM   #8
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Well, I think that it is a good story. But even for a preview, it lacks length. You may want to include more next time and re-read your story 2-3 times before finally posting it. This will help you find those small little errors that Astor, and Thrawn mentioned.

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