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Old 03-07-2009, 12:55 PM   #6
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This is shaping up to be a very interesting story. You have devised a good way to see into the persona's past - by having them relive it...emotional - and that is good.

I wonder who this woman could be, and why the persona dreads reliving that moment. Great work!

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