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03-26-2009, 04:30 AM
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Rabish Bini
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Geez, talk about dark
But, to be honest, I didn't like it, the rhymes were a bit off, such as 'spit' and 'it', the choice of words was not to my liking, and it was a tad short.
Just my 2 cents
Hey, I can't like all of your poems
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