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Old 03-28-2009, 04:04 PM   #477
Exile007
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Location: Imprisoned by the GenoHaradan
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Current Game: Zelda Majora's Mask
The game play seems pretty cool, Logan. But I must admit, there are several grammatical errors within the text. I would recommend giving the dialog a huge grammar overhaul if you didn't notice the errors before. Something that helps me in writing my dialog is writing in MS Word or similar programs. After I have the dialog refined and all that good stuff, I copy and paste it into dialog editor. Just my two cents.
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