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Old 03-30-2009, 03:10 AM   #104
Rabish Bini
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To be honest, I didn't like this one either, the first two lines ruin the rest of the poem, it sounds lighthearted, and then all of a sudden it goes dark, best keep it in one mood. The lines were also screwed up, some too short, others too long.

Did not like it, sorry.


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