Thread: [Fic] Renewal
View Single Post
Old 04-22-2009, 02:37 PM   #12
One of Thousands
Tysyacha's Avatar
Join Date: Aug 2005
Location: Kirkwall/The Free Marches
Posts: 3,181
Current Game: Dragon Age II
Forum Veteran  Roleplayer  Contest winner - Fan Fiction 
This is absolutely making my mind tingle with the intrigue and developing romance! I can't wait to read more, and other than a few spelling and grammar errors that I nitpickily noticed, all four chapters are definitely worth the read. Keep it up! By the way, are you planning to have Jaina talk about Jacen, or how his actions have made a wreck of almost the entire galaxy?
Tysyacha is offline   you may: quote & reply,