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Old 08-28-2009, 03:23 PM   #1043
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Originally Posted by Tysyacha View Post
Tysyacha comes across as "a bit whiny" because she's young, inexperienced, and scared to death of Vrook. Consider a child: When s/he's totally being beaten at any kind of game and doesn't know how to win, s/he might start wondering, and whining, about if his/her opponent is playing fair.
I understood that. It just struck me she was whining a bit too much, Tys. Considering how many of your works I have reviewed, how often have I come down really hard?

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