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Old 10-08-2009, 02:07 AM   #1069
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Originally Posted by Endorenna View Post
Thank you. I thought about the critter being immune to its own poison, so I had her thrown the spine in a way that pierced its brain. You're right, though--I should've made it clearer. >_<

Oh, well. That's what I get for finishing things at three in the morning.
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