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Old 03-15-2010, 05:26 PM   #1
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Exclamation The Rise and Fall of the HK Units

This is my latest Work in progress.
Its about the Hk units and my story of what happens to them after the events of TSL this is a roughish version and there is sure to be some mistakes

Bare in mind this is only Part 1 of 3 i will post each part on this thread then combine them all for easier use.

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I put gaps in between most lines as i think its easier to read the Dialogue that way

Feed Back please

Part 2 should be finished by april at the latest and that finishes Book 1
Then Book two will catch up to present day {the Bit at the begining}

sorry about any spelling or grammer mistakes but dont just comment on that
I will have fixed most of them and update them in the finished version

Feed Back please

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