I just read the prologue and I absolutely love it! You 're a really good writer, you should definitely keep doing this!
I really like the way you managed to write FOA's story in a different manner than the original story, but I still get that 'Indy feeling' by reading it.
Greatest piece of fan fiction that I've ever read, cheers!
The seas and the weathers are what is;
your vessels adapt to them or sink.