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Old 05-02-2010, 06:17 PM   #13
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I can't remember if that line was in the original version of the prologue, or the final version, which was edited by Rob MacGregor (Rob and I go way back). I e-mailed him the prologue for his professional evaluation, just to see if I had the Indy style down, and he responded very favorably, adding a few tips on how to 'tighten' the narrative. So I used his editing style as an example for all subsequent chapters, and the story is so much better for it.

My choice of Julianne Moore to represent Sophia goes back to the days of the old IndyFan forum:

Sophia Hapgood does my bidding.

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