This is a very good read. Honestly, I can't think of anything in it to criticize. The story has me wanting to read more, the characters are interesting and fleshed out even at this early stage, I didn't notice any grammar or spelling mistakes, etc. etc.
So...any word on the next chapter?
Chapter 12 of A Soul Adrift
: On the planet Felucia, a young apprentice of the Dark Side thinks back to the beginning of her training as she lies in wait for her prey...
All the Time
: After four years in the Unknown Regions, the Exile returns to the known galaxy to visit an old enemy.
: A master of the Dark Side finds himself about to lose the one thing he cares about--and he will do anything to stop her from endangering herself.