I am TRES JOLIE (so glad) that you happened to read this portion today!
What you said does NOT sound "dumb" at all. You know what would have sounded dumb? "Good story". You actually told me something specific that you liked about it, and that is NEVER dumb. Don't worry--the next part is surely going to "stir things up" a bit!
Merci beaucoup (thank you so much)! for continuing to read this. I'll post part 3 soon!
P.S. I hope your sis likes the description of the dress as well as my sis will!