Oh. Snap. Conditions in stories like this never work out well. >_< And poor Elise! She just can't win! Either her sister and her step-dad will get engaged on her wedding day, or she'll have her sister and her step-dad screaming at each other for years to come, and possibly have her sister turned out in the streets.
I eagerly await the next installment. ^_^ I want to see how this turns out...
Chapter 12 of A Soul Adrift
: On the planet Felucia, a young apprentice of the Dark Side thinks back to the beginning of her training as she lies in wait for her prey...
All the Time
: After four years in the Unknown Regions, the Exile returns to the known galaxy to visit an old enemy.
: A master of the Dark Side finds himself about to lose the one thing he cares about--and he will do anything to stop her from endangering herself.