This story was so gripping--and utterly creepy--that I tore through chapters in between watching Sesame Street clips and that video of "Take On Me" from A-Ha to get rid of the jitters before beginning the next installment! I'm lucky it wasn't completely dark when I read it, too!
Keep up the fantastic work! Do you roleplay, by any chance?
By the way, when I read the part about half of Camryn's face being MISSING, my stomach lurched. I was reminded of "Amnesia: The Dark Descent", a new release from Fractional Games, in which you can't look at the monsters too long or you'll go crazy. There's a part in that game where it talks about "heads split down the middle..." Shiver!