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Old 10-09-2010, 10:40 PM   #10
Tysyacha
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Great chapter! Sara seems like a quick study, though, and like she could keep a secret. If I were Joshua, I would have asked Sara if she would like to be temporarily recruited instead of Formatted again. It wouldn't be the Torchwood Six, but even detectives in the most popular of novels had their contacts. Maybe Sara could keep a look out for any people or animals who acted suspicious--like the creature did. Anyhoo, I can't wait to see what happens next!
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