Unfortunately, I'm late as well. >_< This is an interesting start, but if it were a bit longer, it would probably grab my interest more. As it is, it's somewhat interesting, and I kinda want to read the next part, but I'm not overly excited.
Chapter 12 of A Soul Adrift
: On the planet Felucia, a young apprentice of the Dark Side thinks back to the beginning of her training as she lies in wait for her prey...
All the Time
: After four years in the Unknown Regions, the Exile returns to the known galaxy to visit an old enemy.
: A master of the Dark Side finds himself about to lose the one thing he cares about--and he will do anything to stop her from endangering herself.