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Old 03-03-2011, 12:30 PM   #24
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edited two sections. First, changed scene where we meet the Elf, because as Bee Hoon commented, having him about to drink coffee is like having someone allergic to strawberries drinking a strawberry smoothie.

Second, expanded Asher's explanation about the Vampyr race, giving more insight to their culture and laws.

For all those who have read it already, thank you for your forebearance. For those who have not read it, enjoy. For those who have not commented, shame on you.


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