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Antihero
Ryan PM
TSL on Dantooine: The situation looks grim.
The piece is a generic retelling of the opening sequence on the planet. Except for Kreia pulling an Obi Wan, little is revealed.
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JediMaster12
No specific era given: A blind leap takes them to adventure
The piece is like all of JM12's work, tightly written and flowing well. Keep it up.
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Made Known
Manjoy
KOTOR Aboard the Ebon Hawk: Sometimes, you just have to tell her...
The piece flowed well, both Carth and Revan following through what you might expect. Her reactions from frustration at his attention to the kiss well portrayed. As another reviewer said, there was some that could be done with it, but don't lose that gentle reaction.
Torn Apart
Crystal001
KOTOR enroute to Manaan: The Bitch is back
The piece flowed, but not as I would have anticipated. The switch from Jast to Revan was too quick and her actions unanticipated.
Maybe Next Time
Dinah Lance
Pre KOTOR: Carth regrets his leave
The piece is good because we get to see Carth before he meets Revan. The byplay between him and the 'honest whore' was up to DL's usual high standards.
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Love Beyond Words
Mayla
Post KOTOR: Revan makes her decision
The piece flowed well, and the rejection of Carth was well done. Her later words to Bastila fit very well, including her mirth at Bastila's reaction.
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A better offer
Alexandra
Pre KOTOR: Carth's last meeting withj Saul before Telos is attacked
The flow is smooth but the words used by Saul don't quite jell. Is words are too ambiguous, and I can understand Carth rejecting him. If he had said 'Revan feels we can fix this problem with your help' it would have made more sense. As the heros of the Mandalorian Wars, it would have echoed within Carth as well. Instead we get vague 'The Republic is dying' and what sounded to me like threats against his family as well.
About to Crash
Mayla
KOTOR Alternate Universe on Korriban: It isn't Dustil he confronts
An interesting twist having Morgana the one who survived instead. Having her be the one who reveals who Revan is even more sick and twisted.
I liked it.
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Meditation Envy
Skeiler Innocenti
TSL aboard Ebon Hawk: Atton feels left out.
The piece is really too short to get a grip on. I felt more was needed, at least an internal explanation of why the Exile refuses to teach him how to meditate, though I can guess why.
The Dying Wish
CortessaBlatt
Post KOTOR: A Dying Sith Lord Revan asks a last boon of Carth
The piece is well wrought, the idea of a Sith thinking in a dynastic way different. Her dying request is not what you think, but excellent.
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Emotions
MLyn1990
TSL on Nar Shaddaa: Love never flows smooth
A case of two people reacting to the outer reactions without understanding the inner ones. Atton comes across as an automatic flirt, which ticks off the Exile, who makes Atton confused as to why which makes him react to her. Typical love.
Atton to Mercy
CortessaBlatt
Pre TSL: Atton takes down another victim
The piece flowed well, another of CB's excellent works.
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The Gift
Kendoka Girl
KOTOR aboard Star Forge: Revan contemplates Bastila's final gift to him, and his final gift to her
The piece is excellent, staging the fight between Bastila and Revan, and the bleak prospects that lay ahead.
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To Revan's Rescue
Crazyocelot
Pre KOTOR: The eventual Exile helps Revan with her latest prank
Like most of the 'Jedi kids' stories, Revan is the eternal prankster. In this one they did a make up job on Vrook that was almost a nightmare to visualize.