8/10.
The last part, when Darth Vader et al. entered the story, mixed me up. Still:
PLEASE write more, and don't disappear for so long in-between stories like you did one time!
Also, I have a request for you. "Peau d'ane" (Donkey Skin) is a fairy tale that 99% of American people don't know, and it's one of my favorites. Could you do it in the KOTOR setting? *wink* I'd love to see it.