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Me from Paragus
CortessaBlatt
Pre TSL: The last few minutes of the technician's life.
The only negative I have to mention is the tech states he's not the average Telosian 'Broad', suggesting being a woman when the character is male in the game.
The piece has that nice 'at the brink' feeling, and the last moments, seeing HK watching and picturing laughter was well done.
The Entire Planet
VanillaLatte
KOTOR orbiting Taris: Saul Karath contemplates the orders he is about to give
The piece is introspective and in a way good for Karath at least in a way. He had the fleet in position to blast the planet, but claimed he needed time to properly position it. Rethinking what he has done. The fact that he gives the order anyway makes him now someone beyond redemption.
Just Another Crazy Beginning
FreeSourceFull
KOTOR above Taris: The fight aboard Endar Spire with a comedic twist.
I was laughing about three paragraphs into this and chuckled throughout. The descriptions are well done, the humor nicely ironic and satirical in turns. The very end, where it appears to be a dream that Revan is having is even funnier due to her commenting on Malak's gorget, then pretty much says shut up before I chop your jaw off. Both the sharing and threat suggest this probably happened when they were still Padawans.
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Azuva
ElenaTheHun
Post TSL: The Jedi begin to hunt someone murdering Czerka Officials, and HK seems to be the culprit.
The author's notes at the start confused me, because it didn't appear to match the story itself. The piece is short but easy to read and fun. Too short to get a clear grasp of the story though.
A Night Atton Would Never Forget
Bald As Malak
TSL aboard Ebon Hawk En route to Onderon: Never mix cards and booze.
The piece surprised and delighted me. So many guys have thought 'get her drunk and do what you will, but the worm turned so effortlessly I didn't anticipate it. A riot!
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Star Wars Heart of Evil
Darth Saboteur
3 years Post TSL: A new Dark lord arises
The piece has a problem with flow, action happens too quickly to keep track, and this distresses the readers making them stumble. My advice is reread, rewrite, and polish.
kotorfanmedia
Knights in Tights
Miraea Starr
Originally reviewed July 13 2007. That review is below:
After KOTOR: The Ebon Hawk makes a brief detour thanks to a black hole.
As much as I get upset with people dragging Earth into the Genre, this looks interesting. Especially when you have such logical explanations of exactly who and what the members of the crew are. As one of the people who commented said, it’s insane, and I loved it.
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Cold
Evil Shall Giggle
Originally reviewed July 13 2007. That review is below:
After KOTOR: Carth reminisces
The writing style is good, the ending surprising. It sneaks up on you, and part of me wanted to scream ‘No!’ when I read it.
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Looking For Something to Die For
Nivenus
Post KOTOR: A Jedi and an old friend infiltrate a Sith warship.
The piece flows well, and as one reviewer said, it's nice to see Jolee go out with a Bang.
Grains of sand
Zulu86
KOTOR on Tatooine: The Sith use a sandstorm to get close enough to attack
The piece tends to drag, more foreboding than action.
All I See is Darkness
Jedi DWH
KOTOR aboard Ebon Hawk: Dreams and nightmares
The piece as another reviewer commented was frightening then funny. The end was a bit confusing, but on the whole I liked it.
Stowaway
Belladonna
KOTOR aboard Ebon Hawk: The hiding of Sasha after Dantooine
The piece does as I did what few others have; Looked at the world from Sasha's eyes. The author portrays a small girl afraid, but not giving up.
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