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Old 08-03-2011, 01:05 PM   #29
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Nice to see that you've continued this story. As always I am astounded by how you managed to have Mical turn out to be the biggest baddie ever. The introduction of the Sith pyramid, or is it a holocron? was a good touch. Now it was just plain cruel to execute the Wookiees in order to draw the exile out. Then again when you have cold cruelty, there really is no point in bemoaning it.

It was very well done and the cliffhangers leave wondering what happening next. Good job as a whole.

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