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Old 08-09-2011, 01:47 PM   #31
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Oh ho! Mical did a bad, BAD thing. If there's one thing that I have learned is that you never mess with a mom. I tell ya mom's are some of the vicious creatures in existence. They are a species of their own

That was a good set up. Shirya is now going to stop running and fight back now. Nice when you have an incentive on the line. I love the last line because it shows determination to fix things. Good job Chev.

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