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Old 10-15-2011, 05:27 AM   #3
knight 12167
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Thank you, it really means a lot to me to hear feedback on my writing. I agree that that sentence is a bit clumsy, I'll try to more throughly check the next few chapters for similar mistakes.

Once again, thank you and hope you keep on reading


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