Ha, thanks for the comment
To be honest, I'm still trying to decide whether or not I like this. Not that I'd ever try and compare myself, but I feel it has a Shakespere-esqe shade to it. And I was never quite definitive on my opinion on Shakespere either, haha.
I do like the Yoda reference though! Imagine Yoda doing Shakespere! Dressed in tights and speaking to the skull, "To be, or not to be ... a Jedi... Hmm, the question that is, yes!"
On another note.... I was thinking of having the poetry done by the Exile, but I never really got into my mind as to what she would be doing after all of this went down. So, I thought it be best to have it be like some, after thought, if you will. As in, just a summary of the story, and a conclusion that even though the Exile defeated her Master, Kreia would always be a part of her, even if she doesn't like it.
Something like that anyway.