Thread: [Fic] Heir to the Force
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Old 10-27-2011, 12:35 AM   #3
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A good start. I like the openers to be a subtle lean in towards the characters instead of a full blown action sequence or something like that. Wow Jedi can be monks sometimes! Baff's right: Aren needs to live a little! Haha.

Looking to see what happens next!

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