Thread: [Fic] Heir to the Force
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Old 11-05-2011, 05:16 PM   #5
The_Catto
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“Fear clouds your mind, but it has focused mine.”

Very nicely done. The whole dialogue between Aren and his Doppleganger was perfectly constructed.

The only real problem I have with this story so far is the chapter are too damn short!!!!
But thats just me being a sook, haha.

And a very nice line to end on! Made me laugh

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