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Old 11-20-2011, 11:02 PM   #2
Alkonium
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Again, very well done. The big things that I got out of it were the evident lack of trust between Padawan and Master, and the statement about how despite Yllari's abilities, Master Karos still doesn't seem to think much of her.

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