(Missed this topic on my cyclical checking of these forums.)
I don't actually see any stories here. The descriptions could use some work in terms of originality and the prose needs cleaning up. None of it's terrible from a 'written by a 14-17 year old' point of view, but I'm not sure if that's what you're asking.
Forum A-Wing pilot of mysterious and indistinct gender. Aresener now and forever.