Thread: [Fic] STAR WARS: REVOLUTION
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Old 03-03-2012, 01:02 PM   #4
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Hm. I would say this seems somewhat rushed, plus I personally feel it lacks in terms of... flesh. It is basically only dialogue with a few extra "scenes" put in. It feels more like a movie script than an actual story. Also you merge present tense with past tense, causing it to be somewhat confusing (to me anyway). You don't really describe the smuggler nor the wookie, which seems odd if they're going to play a large role in the story. Okay and one last thing, what exactly is the time period for this? I would think it is sometime after Darth Krayt's Sith Empire, due to the fact that the Republic held strong after the First Jedi Purge (until Palpatine rose to power)...
You should first read this:

STAR WARS : RETURN OF THE SITH ( link: http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=209516)

STAR WARS: THE GREAT PURGE ( link: http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=209512)

STAR WARS: DARK GALAXY ( link: http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=209289)

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Okay and one last thing, what exactly is the time period for this? I would think it is sometime after Darth Krayt's Sith Empire, due to the fact that the Republic held strong after the First Jedi Purge (until Palpatine rose to power)...
This is 100 years after TSL. The great purge, is the purge, where all sith were executed by the jedi council. The jedi were destroyed by a fallen jedi named Nick.

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You don't really describe the smuggler nor the wookie, which seems odd if they're going to play a large role in the story.
I edited my post.

I hope that you will enjoy this story. Thank you for posting.

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