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Sylthar · 03-05-2012, 09:55 PM

Hm. Interesting. Incredibly short however.

I think you should flesh it out a little more, also this is just my personal preference but I think past tense works better than present tense.

03-05-2012, 09:55 PM	#2
Sylthar Rookie Join Date: Mar 2012 Posts: 78	Hm. Interesting. Incredibly short however. I think you should flesh it out a little more, also this is just my personal preference but I think past tense works better than present tense.
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