A Debt Unpaid: Prolouge to Echo of the Force
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03-05-2012, 09:55 PM
: Mar 2012
Hm. Interesting. Incredibly short however.
I think you should flesh it out a little more, also this is just my personal preference but I think past tense works better than present tense.
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