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Old 03-05-2012, 10:03 PM   #3
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Originally Posted by Ziost View Post
Hm. Interesting. Incredibly short however. I think you should flesh it out a little more, also this is just my personal preference but I think past tense works better than present tense.
Forgot to mention that it was just the beginning of the prolouge; so, there will be more added to the prologue before it's finished. (Although, it's technically more of an expanded back story for Kira Sadow, a party member in my WIP mod Echo of the Force, than a direct prologue to my mod.) As far as tense, I just noticed I changed tense a few times. I'll probably fix it on Wednesday, but I just wanted to at least get that part posted.


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