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Old 03-05-2012, 11:03 PM   #4
MsFicwriter
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I also believe that even for a prologue, this is entirely too short. By the way, is Kira any relation to Naga Sadow? I guess I'll have to wait and see, but the surname caught my eye.

My score: 5/10 (5 points deducted for the AWFUL BREVITY of this potentially great piece)
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