Originally Posted by Ziost
Well yes, but it's still incredibly short, even for a prologue.
I meant that it was an introduction to the prolouge.
Originally Posted by MsFicwriter
I also believe that even for a prologue, this is entirely too short. By the way, is Kira any relation to Naga Sadow? I guess I'll have to wait and see, but the surname caught my eye.
My score: 5/10 (5 points deducted for the AWFUL BREVITY of this potentially great piece)
As I said above, it's just the introduction to the prologue. So, it will be longer before the entire prologue is done. Also, Kira is no related to Naga Sadow. (I only realized months after initially creating Kira that it was the same surname.