A Debt Unpaid: Prolouge to Echo of the Force
KOTOR prologue: A new adventure
The piece is way too short to get a good grip on where the story is going. Also I have yet to see any Rodian that was not green, you actually repeat that the Rodian is green.
I see it's from a game module, which is interesting. If you need help with the dialogue or with editing such dialogue, let me know.
I wouldn't have distinguished the green Rodian, but Wookieepedia states Rodian skin is "most commonly green, with variations in pigment including purple and blue." Hence, I distinguished by saying the Rodian was green. (Which I only mentioned once, or at least only once with my revision on it the other day.) Also the main character is not from a game module
, but a game modification.
I was just trying to set the stage for the rest of the fanfic by posting the intro of the fanfic.