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Old 05-21-2012, 03:38 PM   #2
Join Date: May 2012
Posts: 145
Looks accurate as far as grammar and spelling go. I enjoyed the reference to the characters I knew, as well as my own character's one-liner. The story is enticing however short the chapter may be. Definitely excited for more.
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