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Old 05-26-2012, 07:46 AM   #1276
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Originally Posted by LDR View Post
I hardly consider Varik a hero.

Thanks for the review! I will use your advice to improve upon my story in the next chapters.
Not knowing the provenance of the character, perhaps I should have merely called him the main character. As for the review, I hope I helped.

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