OK, here's a weirder request. I'm putting together the updated version of the opening movie and need someone to proof read my opening crawl. Spellcheck says it's OK, and I've been over it at least ten times, but there still might be something I've missed. If you have a couple of minutes, let me know if you find anything.
From the ashes of the Sith
triumvirate's devastation, a broken
Republic has arisen. Turning to the
crime lords, droids, merchants
and assassins as new leaders,
citizens have seceded from
the galactic government, forming
their own independent factions.
A despairing and weakening
senate has outlawed the
Jedi. The once revered warriors
have fallen into memory.
Amidst the chaos, a lone
scientist has taken it upon
themselves to seek the legendary
Jedi general, Revan, a man
who's return many hope will
change the galaxy for the better.
Meanwhile, in the furthest reaches
of the galaxy, something lingers.
The darkest will ever created by
the Force. It bides it's time, nearing
the moment it has long
anticipated. The moment it will
return and remind the galaxy
what the power of the dark side