1) Don't compare yourself to Lucas.
2) Don't just say here is my story and post a link; we won't go to it.
3)You may not be that good of a writer, but don't assume those who are somewhat competent will take up your story.
This thread is a waste of time, and so is my reply. I'm just posting because I am bored. And to let you know that if you want to get noticed as a storyteller around here (if you write or not) you went about it the wrong way. Ohhh-kay? Cool.
Oh and one last thing, what the hell did you write if not Fanfiction? It's about Kotor III, you're a fan, and its a story. Ergo, it be fanfiction, mate. Just sayin'....