Thread: [Fic] The Promise
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Old 02-19-2013, 09:01 AM   #11
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I love chapters that end in a cliffhanger. I'm not certain who Vemrin is, but already I don't like him. You've pulled me right into the story enough to root for your protagonist to win.

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