Originally Posted by machievelli
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Squadron Legacy, Chapter 9; Rewrite
Mandalorian War era: Chapter 9 of an ongoing work, rewritten.
Remember editing. You used though instead of thought for example.
Nice to see you back. The piece is nice and tightly written, concentrating on survival and evasion is right up there with the way SERE (Survival, Evasion, Resistance and Escape) is taught.
A much better read
Thanks, I have been reading up on SERE school, and I've also read a detailed account of Scott O'Grady's week in enemy territory. That has contributed a lot toward this story. Sorry for the poor editing, I wrote most of it fairly late at night.