I like the idea, i don't have a computer right now, but if you need a voice actor, i'd be happy to try.
Also what about having it so instead of czerka (since they are kind of despicable) have it as the republic looking to create a small base for mining minerals or something to help the republic in the war. Also you could have this before the star forge planet as a sort of stop to help out before the main mission.
For your story i have no complaints, though. I may suggest more in the future