Ahh! Fan fiction! Run!
Ya, the Jan bit was COMPLETLEY predictable, and I would have liked to see her die and see Kyle go completley insane before being pulled back by Luke. Thats what games miss so much, character psycology. Oh how I miss the demented rants of Durandal or the psychotic episodes of Tycho... thats also why I never thought that Deus Ex was "all that".