Nice story, Wes, if a bit convoluted for my taste. After all, why would Desann and Tavion go through the whole rigamarole of trying to fool Kyle, when a simple thing would work just as well?
Also, maybe it was me, but when the cutscene showed Tavion slashing at Jan, my first instinct was that "She isn't dead, they always bring back the hero," but when the game then later talked about Jan's death quite often, I did feel as if this time it HAD really happened.
So then when Tavion revealed she WAS still alive, I was kinda wondering if it would be a trick.
I kinda like it the way it is.