well there are a few problems with it...
you saving throws look a little high for a level 1 pc, and you seem a little short on skills.
I don't have my book with me right now (i am at work), but if you want we could start building you a new pc?
If you want to build a new pc the first step is class and species.
First level classes are Soldger, Scounder, Fringer, Scout, Noble, Force Adapt, Jedi Guardian, and Jedi Counsalor.
I don't have to blow up everything
I jusk like to.