Number 1: Very good job on a most excellent chapter Havoc.
Number 2: Either next chapter or the chapter after that needs to be written from the Armies standpoint.
Number 3: When will darthfergie rear his evil head?
That's all I have to say, except again, good job on the last chapter Havoc.
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