Thread: My first book
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Old 08-23-2001, 12:48 PM   #3
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That was very good! I didn't see many basic grammar errors that I could see anyway,it kept me interested, and it was all around a clever beginning to the start of what sounds like a very intriguing plot. I really like it!
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